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How does it feel to work from home & not to be able to go to school?" (100 mots +/- % et attention - 3 points en moins pour le non respect du nombre de mots !)

Your text

I don't feel very good about having to work at home and not at school.

Because we are not supervised like at school and we are freer, moreover there is less motivation to work alone because we don't have this working atmosphere.

On top of that the link between teachers and students is not that simple because not all teachers use the same means or because the internet is difficult to use.

The fact of working at home can quickly make us lose our concentration or do other things and staying at home is very long because we can't get some fresh air or see our friends.

Corrected text

I don't feel very good about having to work at home and not at school.

Because we are not supervised like at school and we are freer. Moreover, there is less motivation to work alone because we don't have this the necessary working atmosphere.

On top of that the link contact between teachers and students is not that simple because not all teachers use the same means of communication or because the internet is difficult to use.

The fact of working at home can quickly make us lose our concentration or do other things and staying at home is very long because we can't get some fresh air or see our friends

Commentary : very interesting and well written

Your mark is 9/10

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