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Appréciation

Tes erreurs sont les mots qui sont barrés dans ton texte et les corrections sont celles qui sont soulignées en gras. Ton texte est assez convenable mais il est beaucoup trop court (2:37 au lieu de 5 mins!) et certains mots sont mal prononcés.

A l'oral il y a quelques petites erreurs par rapport au texte :

-he invents the first machine to decrypt German’s =} Les mots dans cette phrase sont mal prononcés

//Attention à la prononciation de certains mots comme : "idea", "answer", "World", "important", "chemical", "allowed", " condemned", "rejected", "society", "died", "AIDS", "ideas", "condemned", "denigrated", "condemned"

Il faut bien prononcer les "s" à la 3ème pers. au singulier,…

Tu aurais eu environ 4/10 pour cette partie de l'oral.

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The Idea of progress :

Is mitigated homophobia during past years Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase ? For beginning, for Firstly, to answer at this question I'm going to talk about two parts. Firstly about the past homophobia and secondly the homophobia nowadays.

During the World War Two, to be homosexual was an infraction a crime and we could stay in go to prison or have to have chemical castration like Alan Turing. He was an important person of in WW2 because he invents invented the first machine to decrypt the German’s communication’s machine, Enigma. This computer has allowed to win the war Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase. Despite Alan’s being a genius, he was condemned to chemical castration because he was homosexual and it wasn’t accepted at that time. With this example we can see, whatever whoever you are if you are homosexual you are rejected by the society.

Nowadays, the homosexuals are accepted by society. For example, there are news new demonstrations like the Gay Pride. Freddy Mercury is another example (he was a great singer of Queen’s the band **Queen ), his homosexuality is was accepted by his public fans and the society. He died of the AIDS virus and to pay tribute to him , Elizabeth II create created an organisation (Mercury Phoenix Trust) to help other people who have the AIDS virus.

To conclude, we can see an idea of progress because in the past the homosexuals are were rejected (condemned) and denigrated by the society while in the present day they are accepted and that change nothing at theirs actions Je n'ai pas compris cette partie de la phrase , their implication in society or their integrity. Moreover, the homophobia is condemned by the laws.