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How does it feel to work from home & not to be able to go to school?" (100 mots +/- % et attention - 3 points en moins pour le non respect du nombre de mots !)

Your text :

Firstly, for me there are more disadvantage than advantage. The first disadvantage is the loss all sense of time because the high school help us for the organisation of work. Secondly, it’s more difficult to work without a qualified teacher for explain the lesson. Moreover, it’s most difficult to keep the concentration and we learn more slowly. Don’t going to high school have social consequences, we don’t meet friends. Finally the positive side, we can manage our time and we can more take a break. Furthermore it help us to learn a new organisation. To conclude, I think it’s an enriching experience but I prefer to go to school for work.

Corrected text :

Firstly, for me there are more disadvantage than advantages. The first disadvantage is the loss all sense of time because the high school helps us for with the organisation of our work. Secondly, it’s more difficult to work without a qualified teacher for to explain the lessons. Moreover, it’s most more difficult to keep the concentration stay concentrated and we learn more slowly. Don’t Not going to high school have has social consequences because we don’t meet friends. Finally, concerning/regarding the positive side, we can manage our time and we can more take a take more breaks. Furthermore, it helps us to learn to adopt a new organisation. To conclude, I think it’s an enriching experience but I prefer to go going to school for to work.

Commentary : ok/good, well organised but there are a lot of "small" mistakes

Your mark is 7/10

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