Tstl Leo Lep S Page

Voici votre page de travail. Veuillez ne rien effacer (: consignes, questions, vos anciennes rédactions,…)

Répondez à la question ci-dessous avant mercredi soir (le 18 mars) pour une première note de ?/10 (CF1). And good luck !

How does it feel to work from home & not to be able to go to school?" (100 mots +/- % et attention - 3 points en moins pour le non respect du nombre de mots !)

Your text :

I think that working at home allows me to organize my schedule as I wish and therefore to work at my own pace but not having the teachers available to explain to us, helping us is not a good long term solution. we need their knowledge and advice in order to work properly. in my opinion it is essential to have a day to supervise so as not to lose the academic rhythm. Today we are fortunate to have technological means to correspond with all the teachers and thus advance our program. It is undoubtedly a way of making us more independent (like a learning in life).

Corrected text :

I think that working at home allows me to organize my schedule as I wish and therefore to work at my own pace but not having the teachers available to explain to us helping and help us is not a good long term solution. We need their knowledge and advice in order to work properly. In my opinion it is essential to have a day to supervise be supervised so as not to lose the academic rhythm. Today we are fortunate to have technological means to correspond with all the teachers and thus advance on our program. It is undoubtedly a way of making us more independent (like a learning in about life).

Commentary : quite good

Your mark is 7.5/10

Unless otherwise stated, the content of this page is licensed under Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 License