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How does it feel to work from home & not to be able to go to school?" (100 mots +/- % et attention - 3 points en moins pour le non respect du nombre de mots!)

Your text :

Working at home requires a lot of organization because it is more complicated to concentrate at home than at school, i find that we are less motivated at home because in class we are forced to work. It is easier to work in high school because we have fixed hours and a teacher who teaches us, while at home we have no fixed timetables and no teacher if we have questions or need help. The fact of not being able to go school is a constraint to ba able to advance courses properly and also not to see our friends.

Corrected text :

Working at home requires a lot of organization because it is more complicated to concentrate at home than at school, I find that we are less motivated at home because in class we are forced to work. It is easier to work in our high school because we have fixed hours and a teacher who teaches us, while at home we have no fixed timetables and there is no teacher if we have questions or need help. The fact of not being able to go to school is a constraint to ba able to advance **and stops us from progressing with our courses properly and also not to see from not seeing our friends.

Commentary : quite good, interesting.

and your mark is 7/10