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Tes erreurs sont les mots qui sont barrés dans ton texte et les corrections sont celles qui sont soulignées en gras. Ton texte est assez bien écrit et la durée est parfaite (5:09 mins). Par contre, certains phrases/mots sont mal prononcés.

A l'oral il y a quelques petites erreurs par rapport au texte :

Was there been an evolution of ideas over time? =} Has there been an evolution of ideas over time?

"The AIDS is a sexually transmit disease that emerge in the…" =} "AIDS is a sexually transmitted disease that emerged in the…"

"which was released in the 1993" =} "which was released in 1993"

"the main character is himself affect by this disease" =} "the main character is himself affected by this disease

"AIDS could be transmit like a bacterium" =} "AIDS could be transmitted like a bacterium"

"it was transmit only by blood" =} "it was transmitted only by blood

"which then result in discrimination against that person =} "which then resulted in discrimination against that person

"this disease is not easily transmit" =} "this disease is not easily transmitted "

"In addition, behind well informed" =} "In addition, being well informed""

"we we're about it was to make jokes or to criticize" =} "we heard about it was to make jokes or to criticize

"homophobia was not prohibit by law =} "homophobia was not prohibited by law

"this type of person was very often insult and ridiculed" =} "this type of person was very often insulted and ridiculed"

"discrimination based on sexual orientation was introduce into law in 1985 =} "discrimination based on sexual orientation was introduced into law in 1985"

"The population has accept their difference" =} "The population has accepted their difference"

Attention à la prononciation de certains mots comme : "idea", "patient", "die", "cuddles", "know/knew", "work", "accentuated", "our", "also", "considered", "consequently", "type", "since", "certain", "couples", "labor", "death",

Il faut bien prononcer les "s" à la 3ème pers. au singulier,…

Tu aurais eu environ 7/10 pour cette partie de l'oral.

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The Idea of Progress

Has there been an evolution of ideas over time?

Introduction: To introduce you to this notion, of the "idea of ​​progress", I'm going to talk to you about two different subjects that evolve over time.

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I) AIDS

AIDS is a sexually transmitted disease that emerged in the 1981s early 1980s .

This disease is not a disease that kills humans but it destroys the immune system, the patient will then die from any disease.

In the film Philadelphia, which was released in 1993, the main character is himself affected by this disease. And in this film we learn that at the time there were many rumors and prejudging preduices about it. The person Some people thought that AIDS could be transmitted like a bacterium, by the a handshake, by cuddles ….. but we most already knew at that time that it was transmitted only by blood or by sexual intercourse .

On top of all that, the rumor says that people were afraid of contracting AIDS in the presence of an infected person, which then resulted in discrimination against that person in many areas, as the film Philadelphia shows, the man was fired from work because of his illness.

Also at that time prejudging them said beliefs were that this disease was easily transmissible transmittable which accentuated the fear of some people not contaminating .

Nowadays, being well informed of about the disease thanks to information on the subject and correct we can say that this disease is not easily transmitted, so we are no longer afraid of this disease in our daily life.

In addition, being well informed, there is no longer any discrimination in any area targeting people with AIDS.

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II)Homosexuality

In the movie Philadelphia we can also see an aspect of homosexuality. At that time homosexuality was a subject to be which was considered as a taboo. Homosexuality was considered a mental illness by the World Health Organization until 1990. The only times time we heard about it was to make when making jokes or to criticize criticizing homosexuals . Again this year At the time , homophobia was not prohibited by law.

Consequently, this era was a period of discrimination and where homophobia was very present, this type of person was very often insulted and ridiculed.

At that time, countries could condemn homosexual relations. Subsequently, protection against discrimination based on sexual orientation was introduced into law in 1985 and homophobic insults have been punished since 2004.

Nowadays homophobia remains present in among certain people but is punished by the law of 2004.

The population has accepted their difference and currently 22 countries have legalized the marriage of homosexual couples.

However, there are still 72 countries out of 194 which condemn homosexual relations by prison terms, forced labor or even by torture and 13 countries where homosexuality is still punishable by death.

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In Conclusion, I can therefore say that ideas and prejudices evolve have evolved over time but not all in the same way, nor at the same speed. When we compare AIDS and homosexuality, we observe that the idea that we had of AIDS has evolved in good a positive sense and very quickly while the idea of ​​homosexuality has evolved but has not finished evolving in d 'other country some countries .