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How does it feel to work from home & not to be able to go to school?" (100 mots +/- % et attention - 3 points en moins pour le non respect du nombre de mots !)

Your text :

The fact to work at home without to be able to go to school is very disturbing because we don't have necessarily environment auspicious at work because their can be others people to speak in the house and is very deconcentrating. Also, we don't have necessarily access has a professor who to help them.

But there may also be advantages in the fact to work at home. For example, the fact to not taking the public transports every days and so we can sleeping more longer, which is probably favorable for our concentration.

So there are positive and negative aspects to this situation.

Corrected text :

The fact to work at of working from home without to be being able to go to school is very disturbing because we don't have necessarily have the same spacious environment auspicious at to work in because their there can be others other people to speak to in the house and it is is very deconcentrating. Also, we don't have necessarily access has a professor who to help them to a teacher that can help us.

But there may also be advantages in the fact to work at of working from home. For example, the fact to of not taking the public transports every days and so we can sleeping more sleep for longer, which is probably favorable for to our concentration.

So there are positive and negative aspects to this situation.

Commentary : ok, interesting, but there are too many mistakes !

Your mark if 5/10

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