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A l'oral il y a quelques petites erreurs par rapport au texte :

"…. who attitudes have changed positively on homosexuals and AIDS?" =} … how attitudes have changed positively on homosexuals and AIDS?

"hatred towards those who are affected by the latter." =} Toute cette phrase est mal prononcée

"There is therefore no longer any disgust or hatred towards those affected by the disease" =} Toute cette phrase est mal prononcée

Attention à la prononciation de certains mots comme :"defined", "scientific", "inspired", "Geoffrey Bowers", "fire", "obtained", "trial", "idea", "know", "disease",

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The idea of progress

I'm going to talk about the idea of ​​progress. The idea of ​​progress can be defined as an improvement, a development or a change. It can be an advanced, scientific or social technique s that helps make the world a better place. So, we can see that this notion can be studied from different angles and lead leads to the question of how attitudes have changed positively on homosexuals and AIDS? In the first part, I will study yesterday's mentalities. And in a second part, the mentalities of today.

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The mentalities of yesterday.

First, I'm going to rely on the movie Philadelphia, which was inspired by the life of lawyer Geoffrey Bowers, who was a gay man and an AIDS patient. Tom Hanks plays the role with the name: Andrew Beckett. Andrew was a brilliant lawyer, but one day his colleagues learned that he had AIDS. The lawyers' office decided to fire him for "failure of the case". In an intolerant world, Andrew has to fight for his rights. He meets a black and homophobic lawyer who is Joe Miller to help him. This man changes his mind about homosexuals and both complain about the lawyer's office Joe accepts to defend Andrew in court . Andrew Beckett obtained this won the trial before he died. It’s a film campaigning for gay rights and to show that AIDS patients are normal people.

Secondly, I can assure with this film that the mentalities of before are close on the idea that a man could love another man but also that not to know a dangerous disease Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase, a created disgust / hatred towards those who are affected by the latter. As Joe Miller explains, these very closed narrow-minded mentalities are due to the education given from father to son and from mother to daughters.

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The mentalities of today.

With the end of the film, you can see that a certain mentality changes people change their mentalities like Joe Miller.

First, research has evolved, has changed, which is real technological progress. And so now we know the modes of transmission, the treatments for AIDS. There is therefore no longer any disgust or hatred towards those affected by the disease. Since now the late 1980s it is a known disease.

Second, mentalities about homosexuality, the need to fall asleep is changing Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase. There are the same rights (marriage …). There is also a flag on which there are the colors of the rainbow to represent everyone. They are more listen to respect //mal dit.

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To conclude , mindsets have changed in the positive sense and this will not stop increasing.