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How does it feel to work from home & not to be able to go to school?" (100 mots +/- % et attention - 3 points en moins pour le non respect du nombre de mots !)

Your text :

Staying at home is problematic for school learning and for bac's preparation at the end of the year, It is a new and stressful situation. Learning at home is difficult and not very suitable. At my place, the internet does not work very well, so connecting to e-lyco or my mailbox is complicated. In addition, we do not know how long it will last but given the situation, the risk and the spread of the virus, it is a necessary evil to protect people who have a poor health. Anyway, we have no choice but to follow the instructions of President Macron.

Corrected text :

Staying at home is problematic for school learning and for bac's the preparation of the baccauleate at the end of the year. It is a new and stressful situation. Learning at home is difficult and not very suitable. At my place, the internet does not work very well, so connecting to e-lyco or my mailbox is complicated. In addition, we do not know how long it will last but given the situation, the risk and the spread of the virus, it is a necessary evil to protect people who have a poor health. Anyway, we have no choice but to follow the instructions of President Macron.

Commentary : well written with some good sentences

Your mark is 8.5/10

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