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How does it feel to work from home & not to be able to go to school?" (100 mots +/- % et attention - 3 points en moins pour le non respect du nombre de mots !)

Your text :

Work from home is more complicated because we need to be independent and we need to find the motivation for work alone. Some people think it’s vacancy but this is the best moment for work for the high school diploma. In home we can be destabilize by TV or our phone and in class we can’t be disturb, another, profesor can’t help us for the exercices and for learn some lesson. When we work at home, we feel more solitude because our friend and class are not present, so we can’t work in group and we can make more mistakes.

Corrected text

Work Working from home is more complicated because we need to be independent and we need to find the motivation for to work alone. Some people think it’s vacancy a vacation but this is the best moment for to work for the our high school diploma. In At home we can be destabilized by TV or our phone and in class we can’t be disturbed. another, profesor. Moreover, the teachers can’t help us for with the exercises and for to learn some the lessons. When we work at home, we feel more solitude lonely because our friends and class are not present, so we can’t work in a group and we can make more mistakes.

Commentary : ok/good but there are too many mistakes

Your mark is 6/10