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How does it feel to work from home & not to be able to go to school?" (100 mots +/- % et attention - 3 points en moins pour le non respect du nombre de mots !)

Your text :

Working at a distance is one of the most complicated things, it is very difficult to get to work, to stay focused for the necessary time. We don’t necessarily have access to the help we need. In addition, working remotely requires a constant use of screens while the we all know is the first source of deconcentration. staying at home, locked up in the dark, not knowing how long this situation will last is one of the bad sensations. School is like a « Way-out » for some and we no longer have access to it. This is when we realize the importance of school and how incridible we are to have access.

Corrected text :

Working at a distance from home is one of the most complicated things as it is very difficult to get to work and to stay focused for the necessary time period. We don’t necessarily have access to the help we need. In addition, working remotely requires a the constant use of screens while the, which, as we all know, is the first source of deconcentration a lack of concentration. Staying at home, locked up in the dark, not knowing how long this situation will last is one of the bad sensations feelings. School is like a « Way-out » for some and we no longer have access to it. This is when we realize the importance of school and how incridible we are to have access to it.

Commentary : really interesting to read but there are a few mistakes !

and your mark is 8/10

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