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How does it feel to work from home & not to be able to go to school?" (100 mots +/- % et attention - 3 points en moins pour le non respect du nombre de mots !)

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The fact of no longer being able to go to school and work at home i find that good in the sense that it forces us to acquire a certain autonomy, to know how to manage our time and to try to understand for ourselves moreover we can work at our own rhythm which can be a time saver but i find it a pity in the sense that with us it is sometimes more difficult to put to work because we are more easily distracted by the mobile phone, televison(screens), moreover it is more complicated to understand the course because there is no teacher to explain to us in real and not from a distance.

Corrected text :

The fact of no longer being able to go to school and work at home i find that good in the sense that it forces us to acquire a certain autonomy, to know how to manage our time and to try to understand certain things by for ourselves. Moreover, we can work at our own rhythm which can be a time saver but i I find it a pity in the sense that with us when we are left to ourselves it is sometimes more difficult to put get down to work because we are more easily distracted by the mobile phone, televison( & screens). Moreover it is more complicated to understand the course lessons because there is no teacher to explain to us in real in person and not ,only from a distance.

Commentary : Very good ! Really interesting and well written !

and here's your mark : 9.5/10

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