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Your project was interesting. However, you should have made it much more "personal". I know you carried out some research to do the work on this project but your texts should be entirely written by yourself and not "taken" directly from some website or written by someone who speaks perfect English !The objective is that you learn how to write YOUR OWN TEXT by summarizing information you have found on the internet. I'm sorry to say that your project doesn't fully correspond to this objective!

Your mark is 10/20

Global warming

The global warming is the release of greenhouse gases and the increase in temperature on earth. It started at the beginning of the XIXth century

Causes and Effects

Glaciers are melting, sea levels are rising, cloud forests are dying, and wildlife is scrambling to keep pace.

Climate change encompasses not only rising average temperatures but also extreme weather events, shifting wildlife populations and habitats, rising seas, and a range of other impacts. All of those changes are emerging as humans continue to add heat-trapping greenhouse gases to the atmosphere, changing the rhythms of climate that all living things have come to rely on.

We often call the result global warming, but it is causing a set of changes to the Earth's climate, or long-term weather patterns, that varies from place to place. While many people think of global warming and climate change as synonyms, scientists use “climate change” when describing the complex shifts now affecting our planet’s weather and climate systems—in part because some areas actually get cooler in the short term.

Because human-induced warming is superimposed on a naturally varying climate, the temperature rise has not been, and will not be, uniform or smooth across the country or over time.

Scientists have high confidence that global temperatures will continue to rise for decades to come, largely due to greenhouse gases produced by human activities. The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC), which includes more than 1,300 scientists from the United States and other countries, forecasts a temperature rise of 2.5 to 10 degrees Fahrenheit over the next century.

Solutions

The solutions would be to find new factories with technologies that release the least possible amount of greenhouse gases, or to use even more the streams or the wind to create new factories that create clean energy.

Companies like U.S. Department Of Energy (Describes strategies currently being pursued or considered to reduce carbon emissions and address global climate change) and Environmental Protection Agency (Tools for learning and understanding environmental issues and recommendations for greener living) are committed against global warming.

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