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I found your text interesting with only 1 mistake !! and it is well organised: there's a good mix between information content and visual content ! However your texts should be entirely written by yourself and not "taken" directly from some blog/website or written by someone who speaks perfect English !

Your mark is 13/20

Today, I'm gonna talk about my dream.


Since I was little, my dream is to go to study and live in the United State.


This is why since I was on Freshman year, I do babysitting in order to save for my higher studies.


In order to see if life in this country really pleases me before leaving for good, I am going to leave this summer for 5 weeks in Atlanta, at my cousin's house.


And now, I'm going to talk about Atlanta, the city of trees.


Atlanta is a city that I have always heard of from my family who live there.

That is why I have always been interested in it and it is a city that fascinates me.


Atlanta is one of the few United States cities with permanent, professional, and resident companies in all major performing arts disciplines:

The Atlanta Opera:


The Atlanta Ballet:


The Atlanta Symphony Orchestra:


All of this fascinates me because art is something very present in my life apart from singing, drawing and painting. This is why it is a city that interests me enormously.

I also dream of going to Atlanta for its annual music festival, the Shaky Knees Music Festival wich which is a music festival of Indie, folk, country and rock.


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