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Corrections

Covid-29 =} Covid nineteen

Condi-99! =} nineteen!

He is published =} It was published

2099 =} twenty nineteen

Prononciation du mot "confirmed"

the first confirmed case to be report in China =} to be reported in China

the WHO is concerning because =} the WHO is concerned because…

that in the space of =} that within the space of a few months

that was only in China is spread and… =} is spreading and…

affects 120 country =} affects 112 countries

infects 150 million people.. Scientifics are…. =} that has infected one hundred and fifty thousand people. Scientists are….

are looking for a vaccine or a medicine will hello workers fight=} medicine which will allow people to fight

in spite of contamination that those not sole down =} Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase

why the government to close school and many business =} why the government has chosen to close schools and many businesses like the French President say we have war against this virus =} President said we are at war against this virus

a challenge has been launch =} has been launched

students from 30 to 70 years old =} students from 13 to 17 years old

for way to fight =} for ways to fight….

on Wednesday in March in 25 in 2020 =} on Wednesday, March 25th, 2020

to work and finding solutions =} to work and find solutions

and they will also be surrounding by experts =} they will also be surrounded by experts

Prononciation du mot "suited"

Conseils

Ok, mais il y a trop d'erreurs !

Et voici le texte : Join the Fight Against COVID-19

Join the Fight Against COVID-19

The World Health Organization (WHO) has declared the recent outbreak of the coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19) a pandemic, spanning 112 countries and infecting over 150,000 people. As scientists and public health experts rush to find solutions to contain the spread, much still remains unknown about COVID-19.

As the world races to contain the virus, existing and emerging technologies are proving to be valuable. In fact, governments and health care facilities have increasingly turned to technology to help manage the outbreak. In China, where the first confirmed case of COVID-19 was reported, the government has launched several initiatives to integrate artificial intelligence (AI) and data science into the healthcare system to track and contain the outbreak.

The rapid spread of COVID-19 has sparked alarm worldwide. Many countries are grappling with the rise in confirmed cases. It is urgent and crucial for us to discover ways to use technology to contain the outbreak and manage future public health emergencies.

The Challenge

In this six (6) week innovation challenge students ages 13-17 from around the world will have the opportunity to form virtual teams to develop technology-based solutions to slow the spread of COVID-19.

How It Works

The challenge begins on Wednesday, March 25th, 2020, when the challenge statement is released. To participate and have access to the challenge question, you must first sign up!

Once signed up, participants will be invited to join Launchpad, an online collaboration platform where participants from around the world can form teams and work together to design and present ideas that can be deployed in response to COVID-19.

During the six-week challenge, participants will have access to a series of curated learning resources and expert AMA sessions that aim to prepare and inspire solvers. Participants will also have the opportunity to connect with experts that are available on Launchpad.

Source : nyas.org

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A Florida man died after consuming raw oysters tainted with Vibrio Vulnificus.

By Leada Gore | moc.la|erogl#moc.la|erogl

A 71-year-old Florida man died after eating raw oysters contaminated with a flesh eating bacteria.

The man ate oysters contaminated with Vibrio Vulnificus on July 8 and died two days later, the Florida Department of Public Health said. The names of the man and the restaurant where he ate were not released.

The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention estimates 80,000 people become sick with vibriosis each year in the U.S. and 100 people die from their infection.

Vibrio illness symptoms may include diarrhea, vomiting, abdominal pain, chills, fever, shock, skin lesions and breakdown and wound infections. Vibrio is fatal in about half of the cases in which it enters the bloodstream, a condition typically seen in those with a compromised immune system.

According to the Florida Department of Public Health, there have been 16 reported cases of vibrio so far this year, with three deaths. There were 49 reported cases last year with 11 deaths.

Vibrio bacteria is found in warm waters, such as a bay or the Gulf of Mexico, and in contaminated seafood. Anyone with compromised immune systems, cancer, diabetes, liver disease and other chronic conditions should avoid eating raw or undercooked shellfish, especially oysters, health officials advise. They should also avoid entering the water if they have an open wound.

Number of words 250 Present the above text and then answer these 2 questions:

1) What laws/regulations apply in France exist to stop this type of tragedy?

2) In your field (domaine), do any type of tests have to be carried out on oysters and if so, how often? Why is this testing important?

Voici quelques "exemples" d'erreurs et leurs corrections

was publish in July —25 in 2019=} was published on July 25th , 2020

it was writen by =} It was written by

He is published =} It was published

This document is entitle =} is entitled

Prononciation des mots suivants "died", "ate", "follows", "wound", "fatal", "weakest", "diabetes", "liver", "eat"

and what we can do to over farthest tragedies =} je n'ai pas compris cette partie de la phrase

To start with this is going to Florida =} mal dit/confus

71 years old man ate in an oysters restaurant and infect with….. =} a 71-year-old man ate in a restaurant serving oysters became infected with…..

on July of 8 and died 2 days later =} on the 8th of July and…..

You can see on the image of how oysters , then when… =} mal dit, confus

in the bacteria "enters" the bloodstream =} prononciation!

weakest immunate system =} the weakest immune system

16 cases have been reported and 3 have dead . Last year 49 cases and 11 dead =} have died and last year, there were 49 cases and 11 deaths

eat raw or undercooked crustacés =} undercooked seafood

and that they must serve for cooks and they flash well =} Mal dit. Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase

In French =} In France

If a test batch is contaminate with…. then the whole batch is discou????? =} is contaminated with…. et je n'ai pas compris le mot à la fin de cette phrase

this test =} these tests

contaminate =} contaminated

Conseils

Document assez bien présenté mais il y a un grand nombre d'erreurs