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Corrections

The document is composed 3 texts =} the document is composed of 3 parts

Prononciation du mot "composed"

It's provoke a pandémie =} It has provoked a pandemic

112 country =} 112 countries

to find solutions to condemn the spring much still remains =} Prononciation! __ to find solutions to contain the spread, much still remains__ …….

Prononciation du mot "unknown"

As the worker res to contin the virus =} Prononciation! As the world races to contain

proving to be evoluable =} proving to be evolving

Prononciation du mot "confirmed"

the first confirmed…. was report =} …… was reported

use many technology to help manage =} use many forms of technology to help manage the outbreak by AI

Prononciation des mots "spread" et "sparked"

many country are…… =} many countries are grappling with the ????? =} pronociation du mot "rise"

Prononciation de la phrase "manage future public health emergencies."

the challenge begins March 23rd , 2020 with a challenge statement in ????? =} begins March 25th , 2020 et après, c'est mal dit

Prononciation des mots "questions" et "sign up"

participants will have access to a serie of =} a series of

dangerous for fragile peoples and… =} for fragile people

arriving to stop =} managing to stop the pandemic

Conseils

C'est trop proche du texte; pas suffisamment de reformulation et il faut éviter de faire une présentation linéaire du texte !

Et voici le texte : Join the Fight Against COVID-19

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Join the Fight Against COVID-19

The World Health Organization (WHO) has declared the recent outbreak of the coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19) a pandemic, spanning 112 countries and infecting over 150,000 people. As scientists and public health experts rush to find solutions to contain the spread, much still remains unknown about COVID-19.

As the world races to contain the virus, existing and emerging technologies are proving to be valuable. In fact, governments and health care facilities have increasingly turned to technology to help manage the outbreak. In China, where the first confirmed case of COVID-19 was reported, the government has launched several initiatives to integrate artificial intelligence (AI) and data science into the healthcare system to track and contain the outbreak.

The rapid spread of COVID-19 has sparked alarm worldwide. Many countries are grappling with the rise in confirmed cases. It is urgent and crucial for us to discover ways to use technology to contain the outbreak and manage future public health emergencies.

The Challenge

In this six (6) week innovation challenge students ages 13-17 from around the world will have the opportunity to form virtual teams to develop technology-based solutions to slow the spread of COVID-19.

How It Works

The challenge begins on Wednesday, March 25th, 2020, when the challenge statement is released. To participate and have access to the challenge question, you must first sign up!

Once signed up, participants will be invited to join Launchpad, an online collaboration platform where participants from around the world can form teams and work together to design and present ideas that can be deployed in response to COVID-19.

During the six-week challenge, participants will have access to a series of curated learning resources and expert AMA sessions that aim to prepare and inspire solvers. Participants will also have the opportunity to connect with experts that are available on Launchpad.

Source : nyas.org

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Voici quelques "exemples" d'erreurs et leurs corrections

Prononciation des mots suivants "death", "estimate", "die", "fatal", "half", "blood", "observed", "weakened", "diabetes", "raw", "undercooked", "oysters", "wound", "chemical", "intended", "suggest", "described", "standards", "request", "fatal", "associated", "extremely"

see the consequences of see the infection =} the consequences of having the infection

we'll see how in French does to cause this infection =} mal dit. Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase

a Florida man dead after consuming an oyster contaminate with =} died , contaminated

July 8 and dead 2 days later =} July 8th and died

a second much more serious consequences is =} a ….. consequence is death

that 18,000 people get sick from….. each years in =} that 80,000 people get……. each year in

about half of the case =} cases

anyone with a weakened immune system for cancer, diabtetes=} anyone with a weakened immune system by cancer, diabetes

there are inport control =} important controls

any sample for official analyse of Vibrio =} official analysis of….

if the product are luckinly?? to have a research to consumers =} Mal dit. Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase

it is recommendto be extremely vigilant when?????? =} recommended et je n'ai pas compris la fin de la phrase

but they are not over a 100 person so we must remain vigilant =} Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase

Conseils

Ok, beaucoup d'effort mais il y a un grand nombre d'erreurs de prononciation

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A Florida man died after consuming raw oysters tainted with Vibrio Vulnificus.

By Leada Gore | moc.la|erogl#moc.la|erogl

A 71-year-old Florida man died after eating raw oysters contaminated with a flesh eating bacteria.

The man ate oysters contaminated with Vibrio Vulnificus on July 8 and died two days later, the Florida Department of Public Health said. The names of the man and the restaurant where he ate were not released.

The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention estimates 80,000 people become sick with vibriosis each year in the U.S. and 100 people die from their infection.

Vibrio illness symptoms may include diarrhea, vomiting, abdominal pain, chills, fever, shock, skin lesions and breakdown and wound infections. Vibrio is fatal in about half of the cases in which it enters the bloodstream, a condition typically seen in those with a compromised immune system.

According to the Florida Department of Public Health, there have been 16 reported cases of vibrio so far this year, with three deaths. There were 49 reported cases last year with 11 deaths.

Vibrio bacteria is found in warm waters, such as a bay or the Gulf of Mexico, and in contaminated seafood. Anyone with compromised immune systems, cancer, diabetes, liver disease and other chronic conditions should avoid eating raw or undercooked shellfish, especially oysters, health officials advise. They should also avoid entering the water if they have an open wound.

Number of words 250 Present the above text and then answer these 2 questions:

1) What laws/regulations apply in France exist to stop this type of tragedy?

2) In your field (domaine), do any type of tests have to be carried out on oysters and if so, how often? Why is this testing important?

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