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dated 29 March =} dated 29th of March

this article tell about Coronavirus =} this article is about the Coronavirus

the topic of this article is "Spain records new highest daily death toll, as Syria reports first Covid-19 death" =} the title of this article is

we see who is professor James Naismith and what he say or do =} We will see who professor James Naismith is and what he says or does

209 peoples death after…… in United Kingdom =} 209 people died after… in the United Kingdom

and he say he has confident =} and he says he is confident

Prononciation du mot "distancing"

the —rights who precede the day where there are 209 deaths have 260 death=} Mal dit. Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase

so it's minor than the last night =} Mal dit. Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase

He say the number of death can be lower or higher in all next day =} He says that the number of deaths can be higher or lower compared to the following day

because the symptoms have take up 2 weeks after you are infected =} because the symptoms can take up to 2 weeks to become visible after you have become infected

Prononciation du mot "care"

takes another 4 days for a person who died =} takes another 4 days for the person to die

The most of the death provide people who are infected a months ago =} Mal dit. Je n'ai pas compris cette phrase

when a person die because he have the Coronavirus =} the person dies because he **has the Coronavirus

This person who die =} dies

We have too many chance to take the Coronavirus =} There is a risk we will catch the Coronavirus

to finished the professor =} To finish

We have many scientists try to discover =} We have many scientiststrying to discover

big problem because there is take up few days after we are infected and we don't know when this Coronavirus was clean up because it's a pandemic =} big problem because it takes a few days to develop after we become infected and we don't know when this Coronavirus will disappear because it's a pandemic

because the symptoms take up few days =} the symptoms take a few days to show up

Conseils

Ok, mais il y a trop d'erreurs !

Et voici le texte : Coronavirus live news: Spain records new highest daily death toll, as Syria reports first Covid-19 death

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Patients in the UK dying now were infected around a month ago, weeks before the country started social distancing, an expert has warned.

Professor James Naismith, director of the Rosalind Franklin Institute at the University of Oxford, spoke out after a further 209 people died after testing positive for coronavirus in the UK.

Although this is a lower number than the 260 deaths the previous day, he warned it is too early to draw conclusions, underlining that “daily numbers can be lower (or higher) than expected due to random factors”.

Prof Naismnith said: “I am confident that provided we follow social distancing the increase in deaths will stop and this will be followed by a decrease in the daily numbers.

“It can take up to two weeks from infection to onset of symptoms. For over 80% of people these symptoms are mild, for the much smaller number who develop the most serious illness, intensive care is needed around 10 days later.

“For those who do not recover but die, data from China suggests this takes around another four days. The tragic deaths today will be from people infected roughly a month ago. It is inevitable that there will be more tragedies for families ahead.

“We can reduce the final death toll only by following current Government advice. We must expect and welcome changes in Government advice as science, medicine and social science work together to learn more.”

The Guardian, 29 March 2020

Ci-dessous votre compréhension orale du fichier "Cosmetic surgery"

CHIURGIE COSMETIQUE

Ce document est une interview. En effet Maria a 19 ans, elle vient de subir une opération chirurgicale au nez, c’est pourquoi Jennifer souhaite lui poser des questions. La première question est « Pourquoi as-tu décidé de faire ça ? ». Maria nous dit que c’est une jolie fille désormais, elle voulait un nez parfait. Elle nous dit qu’en Californie, vous devez avoir une apparence parfaite. Après cette opération elle dit qu’elle a tout le « package » complet pour vivre en Californie. Par la suite Jennifer lui demande si elle a pris cette décision seule, ou si c’est une suggestion que l’on lui a faite. Maria répond qu’elle a prit cette décision seule même si ses amis lui disaient qu’elle était complètement dingue de faire ça. Or elle continue en disant qu’actuellement certains lisent des magazines pour s’informer sur le sujet de la chirurgie, juste après qu’elle est terminé son opération. Elle nous dit aussi qu’elle a mit une semaine pour se rétablir. Jennifer lui demande ensuite ce que pensaient ses parents de tout ça. Maria dit qu’ils étaient contents du résultat, qu’ils voulaient que leur fille soit parfaite comme est l’es actuellement. Elle dit également que ses parents étaient un peu déçus de cette décision, mais que maintenant elle était en âge de prendre ses décisions seule. Ensuite, Jennifer lui demande comment elle se sent après cela. Maria lui répond qu’elle se sent bien, qu’elle est heureuse d’avoir fait ce choix et qu’elle ne regrette rien. Jennifer termine en lui demandant si tous le monde devrait faire ce qu’elle a fait, si c’est une décision à prendre sans réfléchir. Maria lui répond qu’évidemment ce n’est pas une décision à prendre sur un coup tête, en effet Maria songeait à cette rhinoplastie depuis ses 16 ans mais elle nous dit qu’elle a attendu que son nez termine de grandir avant de faire cette opération. En effet elle ne voulait faire aucune erreur, elle voulait que ce soit la seule qu’elle fasse dans toute sa vie. Elle prend pour finir l’exemple de Michael Jackson, en disant que lui, il en a trop fait c’est pourquoi après multiple opérations, il est devenu effrayant.

And here is the script

- compare it with your summary in French and see how well you have understood the document.

Maria, who is 19, recently had a nose operation to remove a bump. She is being interviewed by Jennifer.

Jennifer : - Why did you decide to have cosmetic surgery?

Maria : - I'm actually a pretty girl, so I thought that if I got my nose done then I would be perfect. And there's so much pressure living in California to look perfect, that I just, I wanted to have the whole complete package, you know?

Jennifer : - Did you just decide to do it on your own or did someone suggest it to you?

Maria : - Well, actually my friends think I'm crazy that I did it, but I actually really wanted to do it because I saw all kinds of articles in different magazines and I read a bunch of information on it before I chose to do it. And it just didn't seem like it would be so bad, it wouldn't hurt so much, it only takes like a week to really heal.

Jennifer : - What did your parents think about you getting the nose surgery?

Maria : - My parents weren't very happy about it because you know they made me the way I am and they think I'm perfect as I am, so I think they were a little disappointed. But, you know, they accept me for what I've done and I’m old enough to make my own decisions now.

Jennifer : - What difference did the surgery make in how you feel about yourself?

Maria : - I feel great about myself now and I'm happy that I did it…

Jennifer : - Do you think anyone who doesn't like something about the way they look should have surgery?

Maria : - Well I think it's something you should take seriously. It's not like a quick snap decision. I've wanted to have this done ever since I was 16, but I wanted to wait until I was finished growing so I didn't make any mistakes. And I've thought about it my whole life. You know, I just think that you should put a lot of thought into it because once you get a change, a physical change, it's hard to fix it. I mean, look at Michael Jackson. He just kept cutting at his nose and cutting at his nose and now he'll never be able to get it back and he looks really scary.

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