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comapare to Syria? due to…. =} Je n'ai pas compris cette partie de la phrase

a man who who wear a suit of protection =} a man who is wearing protective gear

the text who illustrates the picture =} the text which accompanies the picture

the Professor James Naismith…. at the university of Oxford —was warned because of the Covid-19 for the England =} Professor James Naismith…of the university of Oxford warned of the consequences of Covid-19 for England

of United Kingdom =} the United Kingdom

in one day there are 2009 deaths after people testing positive for… =} in one day there were 209 deaths after people tested positive for the Coronavirus

and the day after there are 260 deaths =} and the day after there were 260 deaths

they don't know the peak is at this moment =} they don't know if the peak is at the moment

Prononciation du mot "mild"

and then the number of deaths decrease =} and then the number of deaths will decrease

I will speak the situation they had to do to fight =} I will speak about the situation with which they were confronted to fight…

China helps the entire world now she's healthy =} China is helping the entire world now that the people are healthy

and the prevention that the people who died are infect probably one month ago =} Mal dit. Je n'ai pas compris cette partie de la phrase

the solution to avoid more deaths is to listen government, science, medicine, social science who work … =} is to listen to the government, scientists, people in the medical field & social workers who work together

people have to listen their superiors =} people have to listen to their superiors

if we listen government, the reglemenary of government =} if we listen to the government, to government rules we will…

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Et voici le texte : Coronavirus live news: Spain records new highest daily death toll, as Syria reports first Covid-19 death

Patients in the UK dying now were infected around a month ago, weeks before the country started social distancing, an expert has warned.

Professor James Naismith, director of the Rosalind Franklin Institute at the University of Oxford, spoke out after a further 209 people died after testing positive for coronavirus in the UK.

Although this is a lower number than the 260 deaths the previous day, he warned it is too early to draw conclusions, underlining that “daily numbers can be lower (or higher) than expected due to random factors”.

Prof Naismnith said: “I am confident that provided we follow social distancing the increase in deaths will stop and this will be followed by a decrease in the daily numbers.

“It can take up to two weeks from infection to onset of symptoms. For over 80% of people these symptoms are mild, for the much smaller number who develop the most serious illness, intensive care is needed around 10 days later.

“For those who do not recover but die, data from China suggests this takes around another four days. The tragic deaths today will be from people infected roughly a month ago. It is inevitable that there will be more tragedies for families ahead.

“We can reduce the final death toll only by following current Government advice. We must expect and welcome changes in Government advice as science, medicine and social science work together to learn more.”

The Guardian, 29 March 2020

Ci-dessous votre compréhension orale du fichier "Cosmetic surgery"

CHIURGIE COSMETIQUE

C’est le document numéro 10. C’est une interview faite par Jessica, d’une jeune femme qui s’est faite opérée le nez pour être plus belle. Jessica lui demande pourquoi a-t-elle voulu se faire une opération chirurgicale. La femme lui répond qu’elle voulait être une belle fille et elle pensait qu’en faisant cette opération elle serait parfaite. Elle est aussi allée en Californie pour cela car pour elle, en allant là-bas elle allait être parfaite. Ensuite Jessica lui demande si elle a fait ça pour elle où pour les autres. Face à cette question la fille a répondu qu’au début ses amis disaient qu’elle était folle de faire ça. Elle voyait des articles dans les magazines et elle s’est renseignée sur l’opération du nez. Ca n’avait pas l’air si mal que ça et ça prenait qu’une semaine à cicatriser en moyenne. Elle trouvait qu’il y avait beaucoup d’informations et de diversifications pour ce type d’opération. Puis la journaliste lui a demandé ce qu’en pensait ses parents de cette chirurgie car elle est encore jeune. Sur ce, elle a répondu qu’elle était heureuse elle, d’avoir fait cela, et ses parents n’étaient pas trop en accord avec cette idée au début car ils pensaient qu’elle était déjà parfaite avant sa chirurgie, mais ils ont fini par l’accepter comme elle était. Aujourd’hui elle est contente de ce qu’elle est et elle précise que ce type de décision n’est pas à prendre à la légère, que c’est à prendre au sérieux. De plus elle voulait faire cette chirurgie après ses 16 ans car elle ne voulait pas faire une erreur et elle voulait le faire quand elle aurait fini de grandir et aussi respecter la vie de sa mère. A la fin elle dit que si on a envie de changer de physique, il faut le faire. Mickael Jackson l’a fait et refait, et il est devenu quelqu’un qui faisait peur.

And here is the script

- compare it with your summary in French and see how well you have understood the document.

Maria, who is 19, recently had a nose operation to remove a bump. She is being interviewed by Jennifer.

Jennifer : - Why did you decide to have cosmetic surgery?

Maria : - I'm actually a pretty girl, so I thought that if I got my nose done then I would be perfect. And there's so much pressure living in California to look perfect, that I just, I wanted to have the whole complete package, you know?

Jennifer : - Did you just decide to do it on your own or did someone suggest it to you?

Maria : - Well, actually my friends think I'm crazy that I did it, but I actually really wanted to do it because I saw all kinds of articles in different magazines and I read a bunch of information on it before I chose to do it. And it just didn't seem like it would be so bad, it wouldn't hurt so much, it only takes like a week to really heal.

Jennifer : - What did your parents think about you getting the nose surgery?

Maria : - My parents weren't very happy about it because you know they made me the way I am and they think I'm perfect as I am, so I think they were a little disappointed. But, you know, they accept me for what I've done and I’m old enough to make my own decisions now.

Jennifer : - What difference did the surgery make in how you feel about yourself?

Maria : - I feel great about myself now and I'm happy that I did it…

Jennifer : - Do you think anyone who doesn't like something about the way they look should have surgery?

Maria : - Well I think it's something you should take seriously. It's not like a quick snap decision. I've wanted to have this done ever since I was 16, but I wanted to wait until I was finished growing so I didn't make any mistakes. And I've thought about it my whole life. You know, I just think that you should put a lot of thought into it because once you get a change, a physical change, it's hard to fix it. I mean, look at Michael Jackson. He just kept cutting at his nose and cutting at his nose and now he'll never be able to get it back and he looks really scary.