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there is 2 row of coffins separate by the church pieuws???? =} there are 2 rows of coffins separated by chuch benches

wearing a complete combination =} wearing a pair of overalls

it's remains anyone who sees =} Mal dit. Je n'ai pas compris cette partie de la phrase

it is also tragic because that religious places suppose to host prayers and hopes and is used to store coffins =} it is also tragic because religious places are supposed to be places of prayer and hope but here they are used to store coffins

Prononciation du mot "Guardian"

published in the 29th March 2020 =} published on the 29th of March 2020

First it's still with a situation in the UK =} Mal dit

there are currently patients who combine???? to the Covid-19 =} Je n'ai pas compris cette partie de la phrase

the director of the Rosalind Franklin Institute, Professor James Naismith explain that people should keep following measure=} explains et measures

that the number of death decreased for good, not just because of ?????? factors =} that the number of deaths decrease for good, et je n'ai pas compris le mot après

in a second time , he explains =} Then/secondly he explains that

government measures because the results from infections that happen weeks or months before =} government measures becauseit's the result of infections that happened weeks or months before.

Prononciation du mot "mild"

the social distancing have been applied…. =} has been applied

they show the horror and gravity of the situation and encourage people to follow this measure =} they show the horrors and seriousness of the situation and encourage people to follow these measures

Conseils

Document bien présenté malgré les erreurs

Et voici le texte : Coronavirus live news: Spain records new highest daily death toll, as Syria reports first Covid-19 death

Patients in the UK dying now were infected around a month ago, weeks before the country started social distancing, an expert has warned.

Professor James Naismith, director of the Rosalind Franklin Institute at the University of Oxford, spoke out after a further 209 people died after testing positive for coronavirus in the UK.

Although this is a lower number than the 260 deaths the previous day, he warned it is too early to draw conclusions, underlining that “daily numbers can be lower (or higher) than expected due to random factors”.

Prof Naismnith said: “I am confident that provided we follow social distancing the increase in deaths will stop and this will be followed by a decrease in the daily numbers.

“It can take up to two weeks from infection to onset of symptoms. For over 80% of people these symptoms are mild, for the much smaller number who develop the most serious illness, intensive care is needed around 10 days later.

“For those who do not recover but die, data from China suggests this takes around another four days. The tragic deaths today will be from people infected roughly a month ago. It is inevitable that there will be more tragedies for families ahead.

“We can reduce the final death toll only by following current Government advice. We must expect and welcome changes in Government advice as science, medicine and social science work together to learn more.”

The Guardian, 29 March 2020

Ci-dessous votre compréhension orale du fichier "Cosmetic surgery"

CHIURGIE COSMETIQUE

Maria, une fille de 19 ans, a récemment subit une opération chirurgicale au nez pour retirer une imperfection. Elle est interviewée par une journaliste qui s’appelle Jennifer. C’est un dialogue, une interview, entre les deux :

Jennifer : Pourquoi as-tu décidé de faire de la chirurgie esthétique ?

Maria : J’étais déjà jolie et j’ai pensé que en ayant un nez plus fin je pourrais être parfaite. Et puis il y a tellement de pression quand on vit en Californie, il faut avoir l’air parfait. Je voulais juste avoir tout le ‘‘package’’.

Jennifer : Et as-tu pris cette décision par toi même ? Ou quelqu’un te l’as suggéré ?

Maria : Et bien mes amis on pensés que j’étais folle quand je l’ai fait. Mais j’avais vraiment envie de le faire et puis je me suis renseignée dans des magasines, j’ai accumulé plein d’informations sur le sujet avant de le faire. Ça ne fait d’ailleurs pas si mal que ça et puis ça a mis une semaine à cicatriser.

Jennifer : Qu’est ce que tes parents en ont pensé ?

Maria : Mes parents n’étaient pas très contents. D’après eux je n’ai pas besoin de changer quelque chose puisqu’ils pensent que je suis déjà parfaite. Je pense qu’ils sont un peu déçu mais ils m’acceptent pour ce que j’ai fait et je suis assez grande pour prendre mes décisions seule maintenant.

Jennifer : Qu’est-ce que la chirurgie t’as -fait et comment te sens-tu par rapport à toi même ?

Maria : Je me sens bien maintenant et je suis très contente d’avoir fait ça.

Jennifer : Est-ce que tu penses que n’importe qui, qui a quelque chose qu’il n’aime pas chez lui devrait faire de la chirurgie esthétique ?

Maria : Je pense qu’il faut prendre cette décision au sérieux. Enfin ce n’est pas une décision que l’on prend à la va-vite. Pour ma part j’ai voulu faire cette opération à partir de mes seize ans mais je voulais avant prendre le temps de grandir avant de passer le cap. Quand on fait une opération de chirurgie esthétique et que l’on se change physiquement c’est dure de revenir en arrière. Je veux dire, par exemple Michael Jackson a fait et refait taillé son nez plein de fois et il n’as jamais pu revenir en arrière et finalement il faisait vraiment peur.

And here is the script

- compare it with your summary in French and see how well you have understood the document.

Maria, who is 19, recently had a nose operation to remove a bump. She is being interviewed by Jennifer.

Jennifer : - Why did you decide to have cosmetic surgery?

Maria : - I'm actually a pretty girl, so I thought that if I got my nose done then I would be perfect. And there's so much pressure living in California to look perfect, that I just, I wanted to have the whole complete package, you know?

Jennifer : - Did you just decide to do it on your own or did someone suggest it to you?

Maria : - Well, actually my friends think I'm crazy that I did it, but I actually really wanted to do it because I saw all kinds of articles in different magazines and I read a bunch of information on it before I chose to do it. And it just didn't seem like it would be so bad, it wouldn't hurt so much, it only takes like a week to really heal.

Jennifer : - What did your parents think about you getting the nose surgery?

Maria : - My parents weren't very happy about it because you know they made me the way I am and they think I'm perfect as I am, so I think they were a little disappointed. But, you know, they accept me for what I've done and I’m old enough to make my own decisions now.

Jennifer : - What difference did the surgery make in how you feel about yourself?

Maria : - I feel great about myself now and I'm happy that I did it…

Jennifer : - Do you think anyone who doesn't like something about the way they look should have surgery?

Maria : - Well I think it's something you should take seriously. It's not like a quick snap decision. I've wanted to have this done ever since I was 16, but I wanted to wait until I was finished growing so I didn't make any mistakes. And I've thought about it my whole life. You know, I just think that you should put a lot of thought into it because once you get a change, a physical change, it's hard to fix it. I mean, look at Michael Jackson. He just kept cutting at his nose and cutting at his nose and now he'll never be able to get it back and he looks really scary.