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Corrections

we can speak about one text =} speak about a text

this text is speak about a new who worries everyone =} This text is about news that worries everyone

Covid-9 =} Covid-19

This news was writen at 29 March 2020 =} this news was witten on the 29th of March 2020

This text is separate of 2 parts =} This text is separated into 2 parts

We can see one man who clean one coffin =} We can see a man disinfecting a coffin

The man wear overall white with mask and gloves =} The man is wearing white overalls with a mask & gloves

He clean this coffin on a church and there is no one coffin, there is at least 30 coffin =} He is disinfecting the coffins in a church and there is not just one coffin but are at least 30 coffins

there is light and no dark for this evenement =} mal dit/confus

all these dead are caused by =} all these deaths are caused by the Coronavirus

in UK the patient that was dying now were infect a month ago =} In the UK, the patients that are dying now were infected about a month ago

and since one week the country start social distancing to dimunion the propgation of the Coronavirus =} and since a week ago, the country has introduced social distancing to reduce the spread of the Coronavirus

Prononciation du mot "distancing"

spoke of the die of 209 people died after testing positive of the Covid-19 in UK=} spoke of the deaths of 209 people who had tested postive to Covid-19 in the UK

the precedentent there is 260 deaths patients die after testing positive =} mal dit + répétition

the reduce of the death is lower because the propagation of the Coronavirus… =} the number of deaths is lower because the spread of the Coronavirus is higher = sens? Confus !

the propagation of the Coronavirus was developed because every people don't respect the social distancing=} the propagation of the Coronavirus has increased because not everyone respects social distancing

The Parisians was in holiday with the sunny and the blue sky =} The Parisians were on holidays

because every people death about the Coronavirus and this person not respect the government's orders =} mal dit

I think every people have need of his family and no no die in their family =} I think every person needs his family and he doesn't want any family member to die

I'm agree with he =} I agree with him

We can see we contaminate for the Coronavirus 2 weeks because the symptoms went to 2 weeks =} We can see after 2 weeks that we have been contaminated by the Coronavirus because the symptoms start to show

Prononciation du mot "mild"

but there is a part of the people who develop the most serious illness =} but there are some people who become seriously ill

explain this document because China is the first country who contract the Coronavirus =} as explained in this document because China is the first country to contract the ……

the Coronavirus this is provacated of people of people, of country of country, family of family =} the Coronavirus spreads from one person to another, from one country to another and within families

this document explains the tragic death today will be from people infect only a month ago =} infected

I understand the family who lives a tragedy dies of the Coronavirus because I live this and it is very difficult in this condition =} I can understand families who undergo the tragedy of a family member dying from the Coronavirus because I have lived through this and it is very difficult in this condition

because we cannot make a last tribute for them =} because we cannot pay them our last respects

We can help the reduce of the final death to following current government advice stay at home, take news from their family and, like the document ???? science, medicine and associations work=} We can reduce the death toll by following the government's current advice, by staying at home, by keeping in contact with the family and, like the document says, ?????? et je n'ai pas compris la fin de cette phrase

Conseils

beaucoup d'effort mais c'est assez confus dans l'ensemble en raison d'un grand nombre d'erreurs

Et voici le texte : Coronavirus live news: Spain records new highest daily death toll, as Syria reports first Covid-19 death

Patients in the UK dying now were infected around a month ago, weeks before the country started social distancing, an expert has warned.

Professor James Naismith, director of the Rosalind Franklin Institute at the University of Oxford, spoke out after a further 209 people died after testing positive for coronavirus in the UK.

Although this is a lower number than the 260 deaths the previous day, he warned it is too early to draw conclusions, underlining that “daily numbers can be lower (or higher) than expected due to random factors”.

Prof Naismnith said: “I am confident that provided we follow social distancing the increase in deaths will stop and this will be followed by a decrease in the daily numbers.

“It can take up to two weeks from infection to onset of symptoms. For over 80% of people these symptoms are mild, for the much smaller number who develop the most serious illness, intensive care is needed around 10 days later.

“For those who do not recover but die, data from China suggests this takes around another four days. The tragic deaths today will be from people infected roughly a month ago. It is inevitable that there will be more tragedies for families ahead.

“We can reduce the final death toll only by following current Government advice. We must expect and welcome changes in Government advice as science, medicine and social science work together to learn more.”

The Guardian, 29 March 2020

Ci-dessous votre compréhension orale du fichier "Cosmetic surgery"

CHIURGIE COSMETIQUE

Cet audio est une interview présentée par Jennifer entre 2 femmes au sujet de la chirurgie esthétique.

demande à la femme qui l’accompagne pour cette interview pourquoi à t elle fait de la chirurgie esthétique ? Celle-ci lui répond que c’est une jolie fille mais que son nez l’a complexée et que pour être vraiment parfaite elle voulait que son nez soit refait.

Elle ajoute qu’elle vit en Californie et que là-bas tout le monde est parfait et que ce complexe lui mettait une sorte de pression.

demande si c’est un choix personnel ou si on l’a conseillé ? Les amis de la femme lui disaient qu’elle était folle de refaire faire son nez, elle dit qu’elle s’est beaucoup renseignée notamment dans les magazines pour faire de la chirurgie esthétique.

Jennyfer demande ce que ses parents pensent de sa chirurgie esthétique du nez ? Celle-ci répond que ses parents n’étaient pas très heureux car à leur yeux leur fille est parfaite, elle dit qu’elle peut comprendre leur point de vue mais que c’était sa propre décision.

Jennyfer demande les différences qu’elle a vu en faisant de la chirurgie sur son visage. Elle trouve que son visage est mieux depuis et elle est heureuse de l’avoir fait.

Jennyfer demande à la femme si elle pense que quelqu’un qui n’aime pas son apparence devrait faire de la chirurgie ? La femme pense que c’est quelque chose à prendre au sérieux et que c’est une vraie décision car elle depuis ses 16 ans elle veut réaliser une chirurgie esthétique du nez mais qu’elle a attendue de grandir avant de la réaliser.

Elle rajoute qu’il faut bien y réfléchir et que une fois que c’est fait c’est difficile de revenir en arrière et qu’il ne faut pas trop en faire non plus, elle cite Michael Jackson qui a fait beaucoup de chirurgie et qui à force d’en réaliser cela l’a rendu plus affreux et cela ne l’a pas « Bonifié ».

And here is the script

- compare it with your summary in French and see how well you have understood the document.

Maria, who is 19, recently had a nose operation to remove a bump. She is being interviewed by Jennifer.

Jennifer : - Why did you decide to have cosmetic surgery?

Maria : - I'm actually a pretty girl, so I thought that if I got my nose done then I would be perfect. And there's so much pressure living in California to look perfect, that I just, I wanted to have the whole complete package, you know?

Jennifer : - Did you just decide to do it on your own or did someone suggest it to you?

Maria : - Well, actually my friends think I'm crazy that I did it, but I actually really wanted to do it because I saw all kinds of articles in different magazines and I read a bunch of information on it before I chose to do it. And it just didn't seem like it would be so bad, it wouldn't hurt so much, it only takes like a week to really heal.

Jennifer : - What did your parents think about you getting the nose surgery?

Maria : - My parents weren't very happy about it because you know they made me the way I am and they think I'm perfect as I am, so I think they were a little disappointed. But, you know, they accept me for what I've done and I’m old enough to make my own decisions now.

Jennifer : - What difference did the surgery make in how you feel about yourself?

Maria : - I feel great about myself now and I'm happy that I did it…

Jennifer : - Do you think anyone who doesn't like something about the way they look should have surgery?

Maria : - Well I think it's something you should take seriously. It's not like a quick snap decision. I've wanted to have this done ever since I was 16, but I wanted to wait until I was finished growing so I didn't make any mistakes. And I've thought about it my whole life. You know, I just think that you should put a lot of thought into it because once you get a change, a physical change, it's hard to fix it. I mean, look at Michael Jackson. He just kept cutting at his nose and cutting at his nose and now he'll never be able to get it back and he looks really scary.