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Et voici le texte : Coronavirus live news: Spain records new highest daily death toll, as Syria reports first Covid-19 death

Patients in the UK dying now were infected around a month ago, weeks before the country started social distancing, an expert has warned.

Professor James Naismith, director of the Rosalind Franklin Institute at the University of Oxford, spoke out after a further 209 people died after testing positive for coronavirus in the UK.

Although this is a lower number than the 260 deaths the previous day, he warned it is too early to draw conclusions, underlining that “daily numbers can be lower (or higher) than expected due to random factors”.

Prof Naismnith said: “I am confident that provided we follow social distancing the increase in deaths will stop and this will be followed by a decrease in the daily numbers.

“It can take up to two weeks from infection to onset of symptoms. For over 80% of people these symptoms are mild, for the much smaller number who develop the most serious illness, intensive care is needed around 10 days later.

“For those who do not recover but die, data from China suggests this takes around another four days. The tragic deaths today will be from people infected roughly a month ago. It is inevitable that there will be more tragedies for families ahead.

“We can reduce the final death toll only by following current Government advice. We must expect and welcome changes in Government advice as science, medicine and social science work together to learn more.”

The Guardian, 29 March 2020

Ci-dessous votre compréhension orale du fichier "Cosmetic surgery"

CHIURGIE COSMETIQUE

C’est le début d’un document le numéro 10 :

C’est une interviewée, du jeune femme appelée Maria qui a 19 ans et qui s’est fait récemment opérée pour enlever une bosse sur son nez. Elle est interviewée par Jennifer.

Elle a décidé d’avoir une chirurgie esthétique pour son nez, elle dit qu’elle est une jolie fille et que si elle se fessait opérée de son nez, elle deviendra parfaite, elle dit aussi qu’en Californie il y beaucoup de pression pour être parfaite. Jennifer lui pose la question « Savez-vous si vous l’avez simplement décidé de le faire pour vous-même ou quelqu’un vous l’a-t-il suggéré également ? ». Maria répond alors « En fait, mes amis pensent que je suis folle de l’avoir fait, mais je voulais vraiment le faire parce que j’au vu toutes sortes d’articles dans différents magazines et j’ai lu des tas d’informations dessus avant de choisir de le faire. Cela ne ferait pas trop mal et ça ne prend qu’une semaine pour guérir ». Après Jennifer comment ces parents on réagis vis-à-vis de cette opération. Maria répond « A propos de mon opération du nez, mes parents n’étaient pas très contents parce que vous savez ils m’ont fait comme je suis, ils étaient un peu déçus mais ils m’acceptent pour ce que je fais et je suis assez vieille pour prendre mes propres décisions maintenant ». Jennifer demande « Comment vous sentez vous ? ». Maria répond « Je me sens bien maintenant et je suis heureuse de l’avoir fait, les personnes qui n’aime pas la façon comment il est, dois subir une intervention chirurgicale ». Jennifer répond alors « C’est quelque chose que vous devez prendre au sérieux ce n’est pas une décision prise rapidement ? ». Maria répond « Je voulais que cela se fasse depuis que j’avais 16 ans mais je voulais attendre d’avoir finir de grandir donc je n’ai fait aucune erreur. ». Jennyfer répond alors « Je pense juste que vous devriez y réfléchir beaucoup, car une fois que vous avez changé physiquement, il est difficile de le réparer, je veux dire que regardez Michael Jackson, il a juste continué à se couper le nez, je n’ai pas son nez et maintenant il ne pourra jamais le récupérer et il a l’air vraiment effrayant. »

And here is the script

- compare it with your summary in French and see how well you have understood the document.

Maria, who is 19, recently had a nose operation to remove a bump. She is being interviewed by Jennifer.

Jennifer : - Why did you decide to have cosmetic surgery?

Maria : - I'm actually a pretty girl, so I thought that if I got my nose done then I would be perfect. And there's so much pressure living in California to look perfect, that I just, I wanted to have the whole complete package, you know?

Jennifer : - Did you just decide to do it on your own or did someone suggest it to you?

Maria : - Well, actually my friends think I'm crazy that I did it, but I actually really wanted to do it because I saw all kinds of articles in different magazines and I read a bunch of information on it before I chose to do it. And it just didn't seem like it would be so bad, it wouldn't hurt so much, it only takes like a week to really heal.

Jennifer : - What did your parents think about you getting the nose surgery?

Maria : - My parents weren't very happy about it because you know they made me the way I am and they think I'm perfect as I am, so I think they were a little disappointed. But, you know, they accept me for what I've done and I’m old enough to make my own decisions now.

Jennifer : - What difference did the surgery make in how you feel about yourself?

Maria : - I feel great about myself now and I'm happy that I did it…

Jennifer : - Do you think anyone who doesn't like something about the way they look should have surgery?

Maria : - Well I think it's something you should take seriously. It's not like a quick snap decision. I've wanted to have this done ever since I was 16, but I wanted to wait until I was finished growing so I didn't make any mistakes. And I've thought about it my whole life. You know, I just think that you should put a lot of thought into it because once you get a change, a physical change, it's hard to fix it. I mean, look at Michael Jackson. He just kept cutting at his nose and cutting at his nose and now he'll never be able to get it back and he looks really scary.